The official Art, Design, Media & Technology (ADMT) subject blog for the class of 1-07 (2011), of the School of Science & Technology, Singapore.
@Chelsea,Valery,CarrisaIt was pretty interesting but the storyboard was a bit weird
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@ Chelsea, Valery and CarissaUhh, interesting and good storyboarding, but the end was kind of weird.
@Chelsea, Carissa, Valery: Simple but clear story lines. I thought the angles taken were good, and the addition of 'behind-the-scenes' page is also creative and fun!
@Chelsea,Valery,CarrisaNice long story. Good storyboard but how come they suddenly become a happy family? I especially like the photo on Sheares
@Chelsea,Valery,Carrisanice storyboard.The photo on Sheares was funny
@JiaEn & WeiQin: Simple story line, good use of angles. But could do with making it more dramatic too! But good effort nonetheless.
@ Jia En's groupVery simple storyboarding. A bit too simple.
@Bowen & Harindrar: Be careful when introducing too many characters as the story can get confusing. A little morbid too, but simple love storyline nonetheless. Some photos could do with more light as some shots/scenes are a little dark.
@ Chelsea, Vaery and Carissa: Nice pictures and storyboard but the end wasn't that good
@Chelsea, Valery, Carissa: Interesting story ideas! BUt the ending was weird...
@ Harindrar and BowenNice storyline... But confusing names.
@JiaEn & WeiQin: The storyboard is a bit to short but its quite good
@ Jia En and Wei Qin: Nice short storyline and nice pictures
@ Harindrar and Bowen: Its is cool but there is too much committing of suicide which is bad
@Harindrar and BowenVery confusing names, and I don;t think Jerry is dead.
@ Jia En and Wei Qin: Short storyline and good pictures
@ Harindrar and Bowen: Nice dramatic storyline but very confusing
@ Lindsay and DarshanAWESOME!! But, didn't like the bionicle dude as the bear's father.
@Jia En,Weiqinshort and sweet
@lindsay and friend:some pictures you had only partial of your characters shown...but a short and sweet story
@Darshan and Lindsay: Your storyboard is a bit weird but it is cool
@Lindsay, Darshan: Funny and interesting! Good job!
@Harindrar,Bowennice story and rhyming names
@ Lindsay and Darshan: Nice Pictures, mixture of characters, very funny
@Lindsay & Darshan: A little morbid, could do with more close-up shots of the fight...make it more dramatic and 'action-packed'!
@Chelsea, Valery, CarissaNice story but too much text@ Wei Qin, JiaEnNice story, but feels a bit too short.@ Harindrar and BowenFunny Story. But can improve the background@Lindsay and DashanNIce Story. Is this a reference to Star Wars? XD
@Lindsay and DarshanThe droid part is cool, but I don't think a machine can actually be a bear's father
@jia en & friend: all your shots were the same maybe some close ups would be nice...but gd anyway
@Chelsea, Valery, Carissa:Nice Work but try not to use so much text
@WaiKit & Praveen: Important to include 'descriptions' as this will make the storyboard more complete! Can go even closer for some of the close-up shots. Confusing storyline, could do with a little more work.
@Praveen,WaiKitnice food story and good twist in the storyboard nice job
@wai kit & friend: good shots!!! that is the best so far
@ Carrissa,Chelsea and valery:Very nice and interesting@ Jia eEn and Wei Qin: Short and sweet@ Lindsay and Darshan:Nice and captivating story.Could be improved with more suspense but without the 'dad'@ Praveen and Wai Kit:Would be better with description.But interesting and nice....
@Wai Kit and Praveen: Nice pictures and storyline but I think some pictures were not nessesary
@Wai KIt,Praveen: Nice story ideas. Perhaps you could add some descriptions...
@Wai Kit and PraveenI think there are some photos that are redundant, but nice twist in storyline
@Dylan & Sherwin: Some pictures are a bit dark, might want to consider shooting in better-light conditions. Might want to consider taking even closer close-up shots, and go lower in your angled shots, since most shots are shot at a higher angle!
@Dylan and SherwinStory is NOT original.
@Dylan & friend: GOOD JOB!!!!!!
@Dylan,SherwinNice epic story of star wars I like it.I like the last part best
@Dylan and SherwinNext time try to take pictures in a brighter place anyway,good job
@Wai Kit and Praveen Nice storyline!Loved it.
@Dylan, Sherwin: Very interesting storyline. Keep up the good work!
Epic storyboard nice job
@ Dylan and Sherwin: add hokkien!!But the story is great though not new...
@ Sherwin and Dylan: The storyline is too similar to Star Wars, but good twist to the story
@Wai Kit and Praveen: Nice storyboard! Your and your food!
@Edwin & Ryan: Too long a fight scene might make the audience lose their interests. Some pictures are a little dark and unclear. Would be better if description boxes are included to tell the entire story. Some pictures could do with less blur.
@Edwin,RyanNice story of gundam toys and also so much pictures.Nice incident and best presentation I ever seen.However some pictures are too dark while others are ok.Overall its nice
@ryan and edwin: nice twist but a few redundant pictures
Nice storyboard, but you should complete the end and improve on the lighting.
@ Ryan and Edwin: Epic characters but too long story
@Edwin & Ryan: Its is a bit to long and boring. But nice toys! Good effort!
@ryan & friend: the background is not appropriate...but good ideas the shots are good at some parts the lighting is not good at some points
@bryan and friend: gd job but at some points i cannot see ALL characters in shot....what about taking a close up of the dragon dropping the bomb
@Farrell and BryanNice story .good pictures.GOOD JOB!
@Farrell and Bryan: Good use of some special effect, but some shots could be improved. Certain shots would look better if made sharper, especially close-up ones. Similar to previous presentations, some shots could do better if taken at the eye level of the toys that you used for the story.
@Bryan,FarrellNice storyboard and good ending plus I like the part of the dragon drops the so called bomb and by the way how do they revive?
@ Bryan and Farrell:Short and nice story.Could do with a higher climax.
@Farrell and Bryan: Nice touching story! But the storyboard is a bit unclear
@Ryan and Edwin: Nice pictures but the story is too long
@Farrell and BryanLove it, but the explanation is a bit unclear. Might want to improve on that and the sharpness of the pictures. The close ups are a bit too blur.
@Bryan and FarrellNice pics and storyline. However, try to add a close-up shot of how the dragon dropped the bomb.
@ Chinni and Shi Ying:WHOA TREASURE HUNT!!Nice treasure??Overall nice story.
@ Chinni and Shi YingDifferent Storyline and Nice picturesShot 14:You can zoom out a little.It looks too stuffy
@chinni and friend: the shots are good but it is hard to see what is happening as the background is attractive or it is just too blur or the angle is such...
@Shiying,ChinniNice variety of toys used good storyboard
@Shiying and Chinni: Good description and storyline!
@ Chinni and Shiying: Nice story, a little too long
@Chinni and Shi YingHow can a turtle survive in the treasure chest for so long? Nice scenes though.
@ Chinni and Shi Ying: Nice story but does not make much sense... I mean... Pirates having turtles in a golden bag?
@Harindrar and Bowen: It was fun and interesting but very confusing names
@Chinni and Shi Ying: Nice touching story! Nice shots!
@ Yan Feng and ShearesNice storyboard. Loved it.
@ Yan Feng: Nice story but the revival too abrupt
@Yan Feng, Sheares: Short and sweet story! But it could be more complete if descriptions were added.
@Sheares,Yan FengGood storyboard.However no description done
@ Sheares and Yan Feng: Nice story but the fight scene is too short
@ Yan Feng and Sheares:Not very interesting.How can a sniper penetrate a Giant Turtle's Shell!?
@ Yan Feng and ShearesShort Storyline and Good JobNice combo of Lego and a Giant Turtle
@Jereme:incomplete but nice and simple
@jereme nice story and its short and sweet
@ Shiying & ChinniNice story and the characters are so kawaii(cute)@ Yan Feng and ShearesIts hard too believe that only 2 people got injured in a battle against a giant turtle. Poor turtle... But its a good story@ JeremeNot bad. Short and sweet
@Yan Feng and Sheares: The story was very funny and interesting
@Sheares and Yan Feng: Quite touching but there is no description. Nice Lego toys!
@Jereme Little Red Car and Giant Blue Car.......Nice pictures
@Jereme: Not Bad
@Jereme: Weird story but good effort
@Jereme: Nice and simple story. Good job!
@Jereme: Good Work, Keep up the good work
@jereme: same pictures used and there is no different angles and shots, not bad anyway
@ Jereme: nice and short story, did you draw those speech boxes yourself??
@ JeremeToo simple, but you couldn't use a shapes box to type. Short and sweet, though. And my story does have a twist. Get it straight.
@ Dylan don't take it personally the word choices make it sound like you are angry
@ BowenM-hm. Am not. Said short and sweet. Get it straight lol come on, take a little jokes man!
You can't see sarcasm online so don't do that
@Chelsea, Valery, Carissa: Very clear and sweet story with nice pictures.@Bowen, Harindrar: Its very confusing when you introduce too many characters with similar names, but its very unique.@Lindsay, Darshan: A nice storyboard but a weird development.@Wai Kit, Praveen: Interesting and unique storyline.@Dylan, Sherwin: Epic fight scene, but try to make the pictures brighter.@Edwin, Ryan: Awesome battle theme, but it dragged on too long.@Bryan, Farrell: Unique story development with nice pictures.@Chinni, Shiying: Special and different, very simple and sweet.@Yan Feng, Sheares: Cute turtle, interesting and nice characters.@Jereme: Simple and short but can be improved.
@Chelsea, Valery and Carissa: A nice story. Good Job!@Wai Kit and Praveen: Quite Epic for breakfast.........@Bowen and Harindrar: Very confusing@Shiying and Chinni: Interesting storyline but I don't think a turtle can last in a bag for more than a day without suffocating
Jia En and Wei Qin; Characters are so cute! Your presentation was clear and straight to the point as well...Bowen and Harindrar; Your presentation was rather messy but your storyline was interesting! The light saber fights and Nerfy the Nerf gun was creative:DDarshan and Lindsay; Frankly speaking, we didn't expect both of you to be working together :o It was an interesting ending although until now, I still don't understand how the robotic thing can be the father of the bear...Sherwin and Dylan; Your storyline flows just too well:P Even those Star Wars fans would be much too eager to see the comic strip:D The ending is so tragic:( "Just like Romeo and Juliet!!!"Chelsea said.Edwin and Ryan; Your presentation is so cute! Too bad Shin is not there:( [Chelsea] Kira makes up for that though! Anyway, the presentation was good except for Ryan's mumbling... The storyline wasn't too bad. Watch out for those blur images though...Farrell and Bryan; You can always improve on your public speaking skills Bryan:D Your picture resolution so far is the best of all and the storyline is very very coo;:PChinni and Shi Ying; Your pictures are so colourful! I'm picture-struck!:D O.o Mr Cullen! Everything about your story is so cute:P The adoption part was the weirdest thing that ever happened... I was like, the treasure becomes the adopted child??? Very nice twist at the end:)Yan Feng and Sheares; THE TURTLE... is a monster?!?!?! Okay... Where are your speech bubbles? And, poor turtle...Comments by Chelsea and Valery
@jereme i think he could use more colors in his storyboard@farrell and bryan nice story idea and good effort working with toys despite it is small..well done@wai kit and praveen lol.. Different story idea @ryan and edwin the storyboard is too long but it was quite gd...@Jia en and wei qin ur toys were damn cute and well done