Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Comments on your classmates' storyboards...

Please use the 'Comments' section in this blog post to comment on your classmates' presentation and presentation boards.

106 comments:

  1. @Chelsea,Valery,Carrisa
    It was pretty interesting but the storyboard was a bit weird

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  4. @ Chelsea, Valery and Carissa
    Uhh, interesting and good storyboarding, but the end was kind of weird.

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  5. @Chelsea, Carissa, Valery: Simple but clear story lines. I thought the angles taken were good, and the addition of 'behind-the-scenes' page is also creative and fun!

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  6. @Chelsea,Valery,Carrisa
    Nice long story. Good storyboard but how come they suddenly become a happy family? I especially like the photo on Sheares

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  7. @Chelsea,Valery,Carrisa
    nice storyboard.The photo on Sheares was funny

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  8. @JiaEn & WeiQin: Simple story line, good use of angles. But could do with making it more dramatic too! But good effort nonetheless.

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  9. @ Jia En's group
    Very simple storyboarding. A bit too simple.

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  10. @Bowen & Harindrar: Be careful when introducing too many characters as the story can get confusing. A little morbid too, but simple love storyline nonetheless. Some photos could do with more light as some shots/scenes are a little dark.

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  11. @ Chelsea, Vaery and Carissa: Nice pictures and storyboard but the end wasn't that good

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  12. @Chelsea, Valery, Carissa: Interesting story ideas! BUt the ending was weird...

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  13. @ Harindrar and Bowen
    Nice storyline... But confusing names.

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  14. @JiaEn & WeiQin: The storyboard is a bit to short but its quite good

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  15. @ Jia En and Wei Qin: Nice short storyline and nice pictures

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  17. @ Harindrar and Bowen: Its is cool but there is too much committing of suicide which is bad

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  18. @Harindrar and Bowen

    Very confusing names, and I don;t think Jerry is dead.

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  19. @ Jia En and Wei Qin: Short storyline and good pictures

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  20. @ Harindrar and Bowen: Nice dramatic storyline but very confusing

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  21. @ Lindsay and Darshan
    AWESOME!! But, didn't like the bionicle dude as the bear's father.

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  22. @Jia En,Weiqin
    short and sweet

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  23. @lindsay and friend:some pictures you had only partial of your characters shown...but a short and sweet story

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  24. @Darshan and Lindsay: Your storyboard is a bit weird but it is cool

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  25. @Lindsay, Darshan: Funny and interesting! Good job!

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  26. @Harindrar,Bowen
    nice story and rhyming names

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  27. @ Lindsay and Darshan: Nice Pictures, mixture of characters, very funny

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  28. @Lindsay & Darshan: A little morbid, could do with more close-up shots of the fight...make it more dramatic and 'action-packed'!

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  29. @Chelsea, Valery, Carissa
    Nice story but too much text

    @ Wei Qin, JiaEn
    Nice story, but feels a bit too short.

    @ Harindrar and Bowen
    Funny Story. But can improve the background

    @Lindsay and Dashan
    NIce Story. Is this a reference to Star Wars? XD

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  30. @Lindsay and Darshan

    The droid part is cool, but I don't think a machine can actually be a bear's father

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  31. @jia en & friend: all your shots were the same maybe some close ups would be nice...but gd anyway

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  32. @Chelsea, Valery, Carissa:
    Nice Work but try not to use so much text

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  33. @WaiKit & Praveen: Important to include 'descriptions' as this will make the storyboard more complete! Can go even closer for some of the close-up shots. Confusing storyline, could do with a little more work.

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  34. @Praveen,WaiKit
    nice food story and good twist in the storyboard nice job

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  35. @wai kit & friend: good shots!!! that is the best so far

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  36. @ Carrissa,Chelsea and valery:Very nice and interesting
    @ Jia eEn and Wei Qin: Short and sweet
    @ Lindsay and Darshan:Nice and captivating story.Could be improved with more suspense but without the 'dad'
    @ Praveen and Wai Kit:Would be better with description.But interesting and nice....

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  37. @Wai Kit and Praveen: Nice pictures and storyline but I think some pictures were not nessesary

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  38. @Wai KIt,Praveen: Nice story ideas. Perhaps you could add some descriptions...

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  39. @Wai Kit and Praveen

    I think there are some photos that are redundant, but nice twist in storyline

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  40. @Dylan & Sherwin: Some pictures are a bit dark, might want to consider shooting in better-light conditions. Might want to consider taking even closer close-up shots, and go lower in your angled shots, since most shots are shot at a higher angle!

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  41. @Dylan and Sherwin

    Story is NOT original.

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  42. @Dylan & friend: GOOD JOB!!!!!!

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  43. @Dylan,Sherwin
    Nice epic story of star wars I like it.I like the last part best

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  44. @Dylan and Sherwin

    Next time try to take pictures in a brighter place anyway,good job

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  45. @Wai Kit and Praveen
    Nice storyline!Loved it.

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  46. @Dylan, Sherwin: Very interesting storyline. Keep up the good work!

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  47. @ Dylan and Sherwin: add hokkien!!But the story is great though not new...

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  48. @ Sherwin and Dylan: The storyline is too similar to Star Wars, but good twist to the story

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  49. @Wai Kit and Praveen: Nice storyboard! Your and your food!

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  50. @Edwin & Ryan: Too long a fight scene might make the audience lose their interests. Some pictures are a little dark and unclear. Would be better if description boxes are included to tell the entire story. Some pictures could do with less blur.

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  51. @Edwin,Ryan
    Nice story of gundam toys and also so much pictures.Nice incident and best presentation I ever seen.However some pictures are too dark while others are ok.Overall its nice

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  52. @ryan and edwin: nice twist but a few redundant pictures

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  53. Nice storyboard, but you should complete the end and improve on the lighting.

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  54. @ Ryan and Edwin: Epic characters but too long story

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  55. @Edwin & Ryan: Its is a bit to long and boring. But nice toys! Good effort!

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  56. @ryan & friend: the background is not appropriate...but good ideas the shots are good at some parts the lighting is not good at some points

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  57. @bryan and friend: gd job but at some points i cannot see ALL characters in shot....what about taking a close up of the dragon dropping the bomb

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  58. @Farrell and Bryan


    Nice story .good pictures.GOOD JOB!

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  59. @Farrell and Bryan: Good use of some special effect, but some shots could be improved. Certain shots would look better if made sharper, especially close-up ones. Similar to previous presentations, some shots could do better if taken at the eye level of the toys that you used for the story.

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  60. @Bryan,Farrell
    Nice storyboard and good ending plus I like the part of the dragon drops the so called bomb and by the way how do they revive?

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  61. @ Bryan and Farrell:Short and nice story.Could do with a higher climax.

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  62. @Farrell and Bryan: Nice touching story! But the storyboard is a bit unclear

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  64. @Ryan and Edwin: Nice pictures but the story is too long

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  65. @Farrell and Bryan
    Love it, but the explanation is a bit unclear. Might want to improve on that and the sharpness of the pictures. The close ups are a bit too blur.

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  66. @Bryan and Farrell

    Nice pics and storyline. However, try to add a close-up shot of how the dragon dropped the bomb.

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  67. @ Chinni and Shi Ying:WHOA TREASURE HUNT!!Nice treasure??Overall nice story.

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  68. @ Chinni and Shi Ying

    Different Storyline and Nice pictures
    Shot 14:You can zoom out a little.It looks too stuffy

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  69. @chinni and friend: the shots are good but it is hard to see what is happening as the background is attractive or it is just too blur or the angle is such...

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  70. @Shiying,Chinni
    Nice variety of toys used good storyboard

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  71. @Shiying and Chinni: Good description and storyline!

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  72. @ Chinni and Shiying: Nice story, a little too long

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  73. @Chinni and Shi Ying

    How can a turtle survive in the treasure chest for so long? Nice scenes though.

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  74. @ Chinni and Shi Ying: Nice story but does not make much sense... I mean... Pirates having turtles in a golden bag?

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  75. @Harindrar and Bowen: It was fun and interesting but very confusing names

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  76. @Chinni and Shi Ying: Nice touching story! Nice shots!

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  77. @ Yan Feng and Sheares
    Nice storyboard. Loved it.

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  78. @ Yan Feng: Nice story but the revival too abrupt

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  79. @Yan Feng, Sheares: Short and sweet story! But it could be more complete if descriptions were added.

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  80. @Sheares,Yan Feng
    Good storyboard.However no description done

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  81. @ Sheares and Yan Feng: Nice story but the fight scene is too short

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  82. @ Yan Feng and Sheares:Not very interesting.How can a sniper penetrate a Giant Turtle's Shell!?

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  83. @ Yan Feng and Sheares

    Short Storyline and Good Job

    Nice combo of Lego and a Giant Turtle

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  84. @Jereme:incomplete but nice and simple

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  86. @jereme
    nice story and its short and sweet

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  87. @ Shiying & Chinni
    Nice story and the characters are so kawaii(cute)

    @ Yan Feng and Sheares
    Its hard too believe that only 2 people got injured in a battle against a giant turtle. Poor turtle... But its a good story

    @ Jereme
    Not bad. Short and sweet

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  88. @Yan Feng and Sheares: The story was very funny and interesting

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  89. @Sheares and Yan Feng: Quite touching but there is no description. Nice Lego toys!

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  90. @Jereme


    Little Red Car and Giant Blue Car.......Nice pictures

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  91. @Jereme: Weird story but good effort

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  92. @Jereme: Nice and simple story. Good job!

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  94. @Jereme: Good Work, Keep up the good work

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  95. @jereme: same pictures used and there is no different angles and shots, not bad anyway

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  96. @ Jereme: nice and short story, did you draw those speech boxes yourself??

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  97. @ Jereme
    Too simple, but you couldn't use a shapes box to type. Short and sweet, though. And my story does have a twist. Get it straight.

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  98. @ Dylan don't take it personally the word choices make it sound like you are angry

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  99. @ Bowen
    M-hm. Am not. Said short and sweet. Get it straight lol come on, take a little jokes man!

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  100. You can't see sarcasm online so don't do that

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  101. @Chelsea, Valery, Carissa: Very clear and sweet story with nice pictures.

    @Bowen, Harindrar: Its very confusing when you introduce too many characters with similar names, but its very unique.

    @Lindsay, Darshan: A nice storyboard but a weird development.

    @Wai Kit, Praveen: Interesting and unique storyline.

    @Dylan, Sherwin: Epic fight scene, but try to make the pictures brighter.

    @Edwin, Ryan: Awesome battle theme, but it dragged on too long.

    @Bryan, Farrell: Unique story development with nice pictures.

    @Chinni, Shiying: Special and different, very simple and sweet.

    @Yan Feng, Sheares: Cute turtle, interesting and nice characters.

    @Jereme: Simple and short but can be improved.

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  102. @Chelsea, Valery and Carissa: A nice story. Good Job!
    @Wai Kit and Praveen: Quite Epic for breakfast.........
    @Bowen and Harindrar: Very confusing
    @Shiying and Chinni: Interesting storyline but I don't think a turtle can last in a bag for more than a day without suffocating

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  103. Jia En and Wei Qin; Characters are so cute! Your presentation was clear and straight to the point as well...

    Bowen and Harindrar; Your presentation was rather messy but your storyline was interesting! The light saber fights and Nerfy the Nerf gun was creative:D

    Darshan and Lindsay; Frankly speaking, we didn't expect both of you to be working together :o It was an interesting ending although until now, I still don't understand how the robotic thing can be the father of the bear...

    Sherwin and Dylan; Your storyline flows just too well:P Even those Star Wars fans would be much too eager to see the comic strip:D The ending is so tragic:( "Just like Romeo and Juliet!!!"Chelsea said.

    Edwin and Ryan; Your presentation is so cute! Too bad Shin is not there:( [Chelsea] Kira makes up for that though! Anyway, the presentation was good except for Ryan's mumbling... The storyline wasn't too bad. Watch out for those blur images though...

    Farrell and Bryan; You can always improve on your public speaking skills Bryan:D Your picture resolution so far is the best of all and the storyline is very very coo;:P

    Chinni and Shi Ying; Your pictures are so colourful! I'm picture-struck!:D O.o Mr Cullen! Everything about your story is so cute:P The adoption part was the weirdest thing that ever happened... I was like, the treasure becomes the adopted child??? Very nice twist at the end:)

    Yan Feng and Sheares; THE TURTLE... is a monster?!?!?! Okay... Where are your speech bubbles? And, poor turtle...



    Comments by Chelsea and Valery

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  104. @jereme i think he could use more colors in his storyboard

    @farrell and bryan nice story idea and good effort working with toys despite it is small..well done

    @wai kit and praveen lol.. Different story idea

    @ryan and edwin the storyboard is too long but it was quite gd...

    @Jia en and wei qin ur toys were damn cute and well done

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